When Characters Take Over
Stepping away from the outline... 😱
I like to think of myself as an organised writer. Before I start a novel, I outline the story. I map the beats, sketch the arcs, and tell myself I know exactly where we’re going. The structure feels reassuring, like a well-folded map on the passenger seat. But here’s the truth: once a strong protagonist steps onto the page, that tidy outline becomes little more than a suggestion.
Characters with real presence have a way of taking over. They know their own minds. They resist my neat bullet points, shrug off carefully plotted detours, and drag me in directions I never intended. One moment I’m in a rural police station north of Stockholm, following the investigation as planned. The next, I’m clinging to the back of a snowmobile in a blizzard, chasing a suspected serial killer across frozen lakes. Did I plan to write about snowmobiles? Not at all. Do I know the first thing about how they handle in sub-zero temperatures? Absolutely not. But my protagonist insisted, and I had no choice but to follow.
This is the paradox of writing. We set the stage, but our characters perform the play. The stronger they are, the less control we seem to have. And that’s where the real magic lies.
When a character takes over, they create problems for their author. Suddenly I’m researching Swedish snowmobile brands, windchill factors, and how long it takes for frostbite to set in. I’m watching YouTube tutorials on winter survival skills and messaging a friend who once worked in Lapland about the mechanics of frozen rivers. Writing becomes less about dictating a story and more about keeping up with the people I’ve created.
But those challenges are gifts. They stretch me as a writer. They force me into areas I would never have thought to explore. A strong protagonist makes me curious, makes me hungry to learn, and pushes me well beyond the safety of the outline. Without them, I’d stay in my comfort zone, recycling plots I already understand. With them, every book becomes an education.
It also gives me freedom. If I cling too tightly to my plans, the story risks feeling mechanical. When I let a character steer, the narrative gains energy. Surprises happen. Twists I never could have engineered emerge naturally because they belong to the character, not me. Readers sense that authenticity. They may not know the exact moment when the author lost control, but they feel the rawness of a story that’s alive.
So yes, outlining matters. It’s the compass. But characters are the ones who take the wheel. The best protagonists make us sweat, demand we research things we’ve never considered, and yank us into snowstorms when we were quite content to stay by the station heater. They remind us that stories aren’t built in straight lines… they’re lived, unpredictable, and full of detours.
And that’s where the magic lies. ✨
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